100WC – Week #3 – Olivia

“AARRGGHH”!!! I yelled with excitement. 

“What?” Tegan exclaimed.

“We got tickets to the Bahamas” I screamed.

“Yay” Tegan yelled.


We arrived at the Bahamas and a man in a black suit greeted us. He showed us to our house on the water and told us it was the most expensive house, and I could see why!

“It’s dinner so come over and eat in 10 minutes”. The man said before vanishing.

I went to my room and when I walked in,  Tegan was staring at a giant  bucket of bones and a black elf with a note!!!

2 thoughts on “100WC – Week #3 – Olivia”

  1. Hey Olivia great piece of writing, I like the way you said “The next day”.
    It really hooked me in to see what would happen next time you write though maybe tell us a bit more about the prompt but other than that great writing!

  2. Good story. I did one about the bone ball and it was interesting. Also question. Waht happened after the elf was sitting right next to the bones

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