100WC – Week #3 – Evelyn

I’m in the science lab hiding from the scientists. When they disappeared out of the room, I got out from my hiding spot and looked around the room. Something was on the table. It looked like a ball of bones. What is going on? I touched the ball of bones then……KA BOOM!! What on earth was that?! There were bones scattered all over the floor. Oh no, they are coming back. I picked up the bones and put them on the table. I tried to put it back together, but it was no use, I had to hide.

2 thoughts on “100WC – Week #3 – Evelyn”

  1. Hi Evelyn.
    That is a very exciting story you got there and I have one question?
    Did they find you?
    I think you have made a lovely piece of writing and there is nothing in the world that could possibly make it better.
    I think this is your best piece

  2. Hi Evelyn,
    Well done on your entry this week. You have written an exciting piece and I really enjoyed reading it. It reminds me of those nightmares where lots of things go wrong!
    Ms Brennock
    Team 100 w/c

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