100WC – Week #28 – Quinn

Lonely in my bed reading one of my favourite books,Wings of Fire.Then I noticed the ground started to rumble and rattle, my teeth started to chatter.The building shook and then the roof smashed on the ground breaking into one thousand pieces. “Earthquake” I screamed as I was  sprinting to my mum, dad and family then I remembered they were getting groceries.I ran out of the house and into the middle of the yard so that nothing could fall on me.The ground stopped rattling and my teeth stopped chattering.The earthquake had stopped ,we were safe.

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  1. Hi Quinn! I really loved your piece! One thing I really loved is the detail you put in your story. Like the part where you said, “Lonely in bed reading one of my favorite books, Wings of Fire.” because it shows and tells the reader what to picture. Another thing I like was when you said you were home alone because that gave me like “oh no what going to happen next!” feelings. One thing I do recommend is underlining the prompt and also making sure you spell the words right.

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