The Building shook leaping out of the building. Then the building shook and then it Shattered into Pieces. I fell no! I screamed out loud people started Whispering. I wondered what they were saying. scared to go up and say what i’ve been through I lost my parents and my favourite toy. and I am three years old yes. I was smart for my age I no everyone says that now what tearing up. someone came up and said come to my house I ran away going slower and slower I turned around. running back but I was too late.
Hello Nate,
While there were some errors you missed when you checked your story, I can see you are becoming a storyteller with good ideas to share. Keep sharing your creative ideas.
Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia