100WC – Week #28 – Kian

The building shook and then … life as we know ended.-Hi i’m Lock, short for locknesse.

 yiply my birth parents were big on aliens, zombies and the acasinoil mummy,… well before. They died 5 years ago in a car accident going to china it hurts more every time because,well because I sent them there, there to their death I hate thinking how if I didn’t insist they might still be a live.

 But any way I live in a zombie apocalypse yip I know scary, but cool – MY parents would love this- but there dead so sad.

2 thoughts on “100WC – Week #28 – Kian”

  1. Hi, Kian I love the humor in the story it gives me an idea of a book I read once. I love the personality That you did it really made me have a good picture in my head. one thing I would say is I don’t really get is that first word of 2 paragh. from Reese Illinois/USA

  2. Hello Kian,
    You made good use of the prompt to start your apocalyptic story of the end of life as we know it. While there were some spelling and punctuation errors you missed when editing, I can see you have a creative imagination. Well done.
    Keep writing and sharing.
    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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