100WC – Week #28 – Darryl

The building shook and then I flew straight into the wall. It was an earthquake. I grabbed the bar and held it. I flew under the couch screeching for help. While I boosted up and tried to grab the bar. I tried and tried again screaming for help. While a piece of rumble smashed through the wall and knocked me off my feet. I tried to get up but I was stuck under the metal frame. I used all my strength trying to lift it up. I thought of my family and wrote one more letter than I woke up. I was relieved.

One thought on “100WC – Week #28 – Darryl”

  1. Hi Darryl! I enjoyed reading your piece! One thing I loved was your use of high detail because it helped me really visualize the things that were going on. Actually, the contents of your story reminded me of a bad dream I had just like this! Just thinking about it gives me the chills. One thing I would recommend is explaining what happened at the end of the story.

    Happy Writing! Ryan from Illinois

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