100WC – Week #28 – Brae

I was at school with Jimmy and we were doing our 100 word challenge and then the girls walked in and they started talking and they got us in trouble too. Then we finally were full of peace and quiet and  we were about up to 50 words when they started talking again.

The building shook and then the girls started to scream at me and Jimmy yelled at them to shut up. Sprinting out of the class one of the girls asks Jimmy out and Jimmy faints and the roof collapses on his head.

R.I.P Jimmy

One thought on “100WC – Week #28 – Brae”

  1. Hi Brae! I liked your story. My favorite part was the end when it said “R.I.P Jimmy.” I also liked your storyline too. One thing is when it said “the building shook and then” maybe you could put a comma there. I liked your story!

    -Harrison

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