100WC – Week #25 – Ziva


“ABCDEFGH I love you still and you know I always will to the end of time and you know I won’t lie.”
BANG “NO my guitar!” says Pan as she was writing a song.
“WHAT THE HECK” yells Voldemort while she runs in.
“My guitar broke,” crys Pan.
“What was that?” asks eggs.
“I’m taking your guitar, Pan” says Voldemort grumpily.
“but I didn’t mean to hit it that hard” Yells Pan

“Uhm okay?” say eggs while walking out.
“No you don’t” yells pan as she grabs eggs t-shirt like a gorilla.
“LET ME GO!” yells Eggs.

2 thoughts on “100WC – Week #25 – Ziva”

  1. Hello Ziva,
    Your story has an unusual mix of characters from Harry Potter and Peter Pan. Your story is cringe (cring)? No, but it is unusual and makes good use of speech. Well done.
    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

  2. Great Story, the mix of characters is really creative on how you made the story. It made me laugh. Amazing Job!

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