100WC – Week #25 – Caleb

It was a beautiful day.

My brother Rodrick came into my room and said “do you want to play cricket” I said “yeah why not” so I grabbed the ball and Rodrick grabbed the bat “lets play” I said I was batting first Go! I said he bowled and I hit it.

I smacked it across the road Rodrick said what was that for “But I didn’t mean to hit it that hard”… Rodrick shook his head “your going to get it”

I had to cross the road where I live at an intersection looking left and right.

I retrieved the ball and I could see the ball was in shock. Its face was scared like really scared.

2 thoughts on “100WC – Week #25 – Caleb”

  1. Hi Caleb!
    I really enjoyed the surprise twist at the end that the ball expressed emotion from being hit so hard. You could definitely come back to this entry at a later date and write about the event from the ball’s point of view.
    Keep writing!
    Francine (Team 100)
    Twin Cities, Minnesota USA

    1. Hi, I’m Sam. I love how you hit the ball so hard that even IT was hurt! Do you really have a brother named Rodrick?

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