100WC – Week #25 – Bentley

On the weekend my Mum and I were playing Tennis.
We were tied 4-all so we made it to the final round.
I started the round then we hit and hit and hit for 5 min then i wanted to finish the game So I hit it very hard.I thought it was going to go past her very fast,But it hit her hand.
I yelled “Sorry Mum I was trying to win but I didn’t mean to hit it that hard”.
I ran to her and gave her a hug I quickly called Dad. Dad said “What’s happened!!!”

2 thoughts on “100WC – Week #25 – Bentley”

  1. Greetings from Australia Bentley. Congratulations on your response to this week’s challenge. Lots of readers will have a connection to playing a game that goes wrong when something is hit too hard, and someone is hurt. I can see the effort you have put into using conjunctions to link sentences, and to add variety to the type of sentences you use. Remember to re-read your text, and edit for punctuation before you publish (or ask a friend to help you). 🙏😊

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