100WC – Week #24 – Sheina

I grab my bag filled with: Extra clothes, Food, water and other necessities. I grasp the door handle and stride through the door in the middle of the night, afraid and frightened by everything.(I don’t know why this was a good idea but I must bring it back!)  When I entered the forest, I saw the four majestic element trees. I stepped into the middle of the stone ground and suddenly they came to life! The wind hugged me tightly then everything fell silent. They were flying! I didn’t realise they could fly! I turned around for a second and suddenly they were gone…

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  1. Greetings from Australia Sheina. I can see the effort you put into carefully choosing the vocabulary for your text. Your descriptions draw your readers into your story. I loved your your phrase – the wind hugged me tightly, which conveys so much in in only 5 words. Your writing is enhanced by accurate punctuation. I am nominating you for the Special Showcase. 😊🌻

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