100WC – Week #2 – William C

After waking up from a party, I get up and put my dirty clothes in the washing, after that I go to get dressed. Look up at the calendar, “Hm, guess it’s way further into the year than I thought.”

Straight after stepping outside to my car I noticed this white, sticky looking slime thing, it looked like a walking (well, sliding) bacteria, but not only that, there was something about it that made it look like it wanted to eat me/you whole. But it was VERY minuscule so I had really nothing to worry about.         At the time…

2 thoughts on “100WC – Week #2 – William C”

  1. Hello William!

    I really enjoyed the sense of suspense you left me as a reader at the end of your story. I’m a big fan for ellipsis to add mood to my writing. Also, it brought me back to wondering why time is farther along than you thought. Does the minuscule slime have something to do with it? Hmm…

    I have nominated your writing for this week’s showcase!

    Keep writing!
    Francine (Team 100)
    Twin Cities, Minnesota USA

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