100WC – Week #2 – Sheina

“Mums coming home soon clean the house! NOW!” Lucas shouted to Lily checking the calendar,

“FINE!” she replied, they began to clean the house as fast as they could. Lily grabs the washing and screams at the top of her lungs “AHHHHHH!!!” 

Lucas dashes down the stairs and shouts “WHAT IS IT!” 

“I- I- Its… hmm I don’t know?!” She stuttered, something white and sticky was laying on the floor, 

“Seriously Lily!” he sulks “That is so tiny! Miniscule even!”

“Sorry! Ugh” she sounded annoyed, but then something broke the silence… “I’M HOME!” their mom said walking through the door.

3 thoughts on “100WC – Week #2 – Sheina”

  1. Hello Sheina,
    You have not only effectively used all five prompt words in your story, you also highlighted the prompt words using bold to make them easy to see.
    You did leave me with one question, it might be minuscule but what could the white, sticky thing on the floor be? Perhaps it’s something to do with a future story.
    Keep writing and sharing.

    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

  2. Hello Sheina, this is a wonderful piece of writing. You have written with confidence and provided the reader with key detail so that they have a clear picture of what is happening. I really like how you had the two characters interacting through the use of dialogue. Challenge words are used appropriately and effectively. Well done.

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