100WC – Week #11 – Mia

I stood in the doorway of a shop called CRAFTY kidz. I can’t believe i’m doing this….this is such a baby place. I thought, as I opened the door. Someone came running to the door to greet me.

“Come! Come and take a seat at a table!” She said.

I had a look around, and the place looked like a CASTLE with WHITE walls and there were LEAVES all over the floor. I saw kids ROLLING around in paint! I decided that this place looks quite fun after all. I went to sit on a chair at a table.

3 thoughts on “100WC – Week #11 – Mia”

  1. Congratulations on your response to this week’s challenge Mia. It is not easy to weave five random words into a coherent text. I liked the moral of forcing yourself to do something you don’t want to, because it might end up being better than you imagine. It might even be fun. The use of sentences of different lengths made your text interesting to read. You left me wondering what happened after you sat down. 😊

  2. Hi Mia,
    I liked your story and I liked your use of the prompt this week.
    It’s very hard to put five random words into only 100 words.
    Keep up the good work.

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