100WC – Week #10 – Aiden

Today was the day I was allowed to get a puppy. But it was massive. I said to my Mum that if only it was a bit smaller I would love it but this dog is gonna grow way too big. Can I get a new one please? NO! My Mum said she paid $200 for this dog and she could not bring it back without a receipt but for the pet store we got the dog from there’s NO receipt. So NO! NO! NO! She said that this is now my pet dog. Sadly now I have a giant dog in my house.

3 thoughts on “100WC – Week #10 – Aiden”

  1. Aiden,
    What a sad turn of events for the narrator to first get a surprise, but then find out it was just too big. I bet the dog was happy to have a family, though.
    Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA

  2. I would say to my Mum that it is to big. I think that you could write 100 more words to explane what the dog looks like and how big it gets. I have a big dog on my block that can carry a 4 year old person. What type of dog is it?

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