100WC – Week #1 – Trinity

In lockdown my mum said I have to clean my room so I did cause I mean she’s my mum so I have to, I found a book in my closet it had a lock n it which tells me to open it but tells everyone else to throw it away I had remembered that I  bought a mini locker and it came with keys so I grabbed the keys from my mini locker and opened it it said “do not write on this paged” but I’m a Curious person so, what will I write on this page… My mum walked past my room and said I was getting distracted so I got back to work…..

2 thoughts on “100WC – Week #1 – Trinity”

  1. Congratulations on your response to this week’s challenge Trinity. I think lots of readers will relate to your text for one or more reasons – being in lock down, having to clean your room, getting distracted, and doing something because you’ve been told not to. You did leave me wondering what you would write? But as a mother, I was relieved that you got back to cleaning your room. I can see you generated your ideas quickly, and you were keen to get them written down. But this can lead to poor punctuation. I suggest that you re-read, and edit for punctuation before you publish (or ask a friend to help you).

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