100WC – Week #1 – Carter

What will I write on this page? I don’t know what to write. I write so much about cars and soccer video games so today it needs to be different. Wait a minute I know. Cat parkour my car can do insane parkour it does it on the roof to our mansion it does it to the yard and the trees cars you name it the pool house the pool. Boring oh winning the lottery so one day I bought a lottery ticket wait no we all know how that works welp that stinks nothing to write about.

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  1. Congratulations on your response to this week’s challenge Carter. I liked the way you turned the prompt into a personal reflection. It is good to write about different things. Your thoughts got ahead of your punctuation, so your readers had to work quite hard to take meaning from your text after ‘I know’. Run on sentences can be used as an author’s device, but the meaning has to be clear to readers. A good strategy is to ask a friend to read your text before you publish. He/she can help you edit for punctuation.

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