100WC – Special Prompt #7 – Brae

It was helloween we were going to my friend’s  house first to get ready for trick-or-treating. We were going for the big house’s west. “Hey Jake” I said, “Which house should we hit first?” Jake replied, “The far one next to the forbidden forest. 

We shot up the drive and got to the house. The people that lived in the house were a girl called Rebbeca and her brother Jeffy. They were really creepy and didn’t talk to each other or other people. They confused me so we knocked – the door opened. They were zombies. Jake said “RUN!!!” I sprinted.

One thought on “100WC – Special Prompt #7 – Brae”

  1. Hello Brae,
    A big house with two strange children next to a forbidden forest at Halloween was a good setting for a creepy story. Your confusion and escape when you saw Rebecca and Jeffy were zombies made me wonder if they were disguised as a trick rather than give you a treat. I wondered if they were laughing as you ran away.
    Keep writing and sharing your creative ideas.

    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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