100WC – Special Prompt #2 – Cameron

 I crept forward, my toes softly landing on the cold crusty floor.  

Then an unexpected yowl came from behind me, a shiver ran down my back.  

Could it be, was it true these questions buzzed in my head as I remembered page one of the book of phenomenal mysteries .  A monster, made of shadows haunts this house, if you encounter it get on the floor as it floats over you.  I did as said and did not look up at all. 

I waited a few minutes not even making the slightest movement. All of a sudden the darkness swallowed me up and my vision went dark.

One thought on “100WC – Special Prompt #2 – Cameron”

  1. Hello Cameron,

    From the first sentence your story caught my attention. The scene was set and it told me to read on as you built the tension and introduced the phenomenal monster you had read of in a book. Well done!

    Your end sentence didn’t disappoint. It left your story open if you were to continue the it in the future.

    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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